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Bruno's GLISCOR- Demetri by Moozika Bruno's GLISCOR- Demetri by Moozika
*EDIT* Made some changes according to *Macabre-Kitten's critique. Made the sky darker, and the moon less glaring
*EDIT 2* Removed some highlights to create a better focal point. Thanks to ~BanditCloud for the advice.

I present to you, Bruno's Gliscor, Demetri!

I don't have a story for him at the moment, but I'll be keeping you guys updated for sure! I'm very happy with how this turned out, and just how badass Gliscor looks. He looks just like an absolute vicious, killing machine here.

Hope you guys like this as much I have enjoyed doing this!

I would love to hear your comments as well about it!

If you feel that there is something I could improve on, let me know in the comments! I would also GREATLY appreciate a critique, as I'd like to know what I can improve on :aww:

Credits:

Name- *Kuromizu-Kime :iconkuromizu-kime:

Moon- [link]

Other links!

Mismagius:[link]

My OC, Bruno Lebowski:[link]
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:iconkittengoo:
Hello! :) This is my very first critique so I hope I do it well enough.

The aspect I like more about this piece is the design of the Gliscor. It's very unique and intimidating and improves some aspects of the original design (like the pincers and tail). This design is very well put together with the detailed armor and the Gliscor's expression which looks quite psychotic (which I like :))

Now onto the nitpicking, I think that the moon should've been a bit more unsaturated, it's too prominent. While it makes for a nice composition, it notices that it's a stock photo so I suggest more clouds or perhaps a different lighting. Also the background itself (while it's very well done) the color choice is too similar to the Glicor's coloring so he doesn't stand out as much.

Other than that, this is a fantastic interpretation of the bat scorpion! Well done! :D
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Falken02 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
very good
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hoppenscooter Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
I love what you did with the claws and tail! I think that the torso/abs part seems too much like human musculature. I LOVE the work. The lighting of the work looks magnificent and the purple exoskeleton parts look fierce, but the arms/abs look out of place on it. I don't want you to think I'm being over critical. I truly enjoy the work, I just want to offer some suggestions.
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AuraShaman Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's no Gliscor...
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I merely appropriated the distinguishing features of the original Gliscor, such as his pincers, webbed wings, and his body that resembles a fusion of a bat/scorpion and exaggerated them. In other words, it's my take and a caricature of Gliscor. A caricature is different from a portraiture, where all the features are drawn to the smallest detail.

However, you are right that it doesn't look like a Gliscor that we all recognize from the original design, it's my own take on it :)
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AuraShaman Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
... I know it's your take. I'm just saying things XD
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Ams7eL Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
Oh shit...All I gotta say.
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'll take that as a compliment! Thanks...that's all I gotta say :aww:
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Zorokra Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Student Filmographer
I do really like this, the glow the texture it all really makes it come together, but once again Im drawn (ha geddit!... yeah bad pun... moving on...) to the background! I love how you did the clouds in this one! I like how they match the colour of the night, I tried doing clouds myself at night, but although they look good as clouds, not at night where this looks brilliant. I also love how you did the moon! :D
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Moozika Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're so punny Zoro haha :) The clouds are pretty simple with a textured brush, but without it, it'll be an absolute challenge I'm sure. Need to practice doing them with just normal brushes sometime... :s I can't take credit for the moon though, it's just a stock image set to overlay or something haha. It does look nice though! =P

Thanks for the comment! Much appreciated man B-)
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Brecreep Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so cool o.o
Those blues.... omnomnom!
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :aww: Blue is so awesome right? There's a reason it's my fave color B-)
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Brecreep Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Blue is awesome :P
But my favourite colour is that bluey green.. teal? aha
Theyre really easy to work with I find :P
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Moozika Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sounds like something I would drink...But yeah, blue seems to go with a lot of things...works really well when set to an overlay. Gives a nice cool touch to any picture :)
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Brecreep Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Teal? ahahahahah It's a colour :P And honestly.. I never understood what the Overlay and Screen Functions do in sai... could you educate me? o.O
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Moozika Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
If you set something to overlay/screen, they will take the colors of the layer that you set to do mix with whatever is underneath it. Overlay usually darkens it, whereas screen removes the darks from a layer, so it'll leave you with a lightening effect. Just experiment with it, and I think it'll do wonders for you! :)
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Crimsonsnowflakes Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
your pokemon are so cute!
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wolfboytakao1594 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Gliscor...man...that is b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l............magnific
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Moozika Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
T.h.a.n.k. Y.o.u. S.o. M.u.c.h! B-)
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GraffitiSketcher Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH FIDJKFEJJGKDJKD
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Moozika Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
THANKSAODSUADJLAKSj :aww:
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nim22 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
wow awesome :O
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much! :aww: I'm glad that you think so!
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BlueySerperior Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Whoa dude. :D
So original. Nice work. ;)
I have a Shiny Gliscor on my Pkmn Platinum team :D
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Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Really? You're so lucky :( I want myself a shiny gliscor toooo :crying: Oh, and thanks for the comment :)
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BlueySerperior Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
No prob ^^
Keep up the great work ;)
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deathnotefan88 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice... amazing design... love it
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :aww: I'm glad that you like it!
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deathnotefan88 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are so welcome
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TamarinFrog Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Nice, I like the colors and the atmosphere in this picture! I also LOVE your own take on gliscor's design. Very cool!
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Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, I'm really happy with how the colors and the atmosphere turned out as well! :aww: I will forever cherish this design :heart: Thank you so much for your kind words!
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tersinc Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
Awesome and epic! Gliscor looks badass here.
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I just thought the original doesn't do Gliscor justice...Although that's how he's meant to look like lol. Thank you so much though! :aww:
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sognodrago Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ah!! vampire!!
and he looks quite deceiving!~
over all, amazing color, just amazing!
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Vampires are just the best. If by deceiving you mean his cuteness betrays his viciousness, then yes! He is quite the deceiver ;) Thanks so much for the comment!
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sognodrago Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome~
and well, you just made him more and more cool
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BeanieGenie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!

This may seem off, but i have a sort of contest going on. [link]
I'm offering a lot for it, and it would be amazing if you entered! :D
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'll definitely give it a go once I'm done with all the projects I have lined up. Thanks for the invite and the comment! :)
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BeanieGenie Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great! I'm really looking foward to your entry!

No prob!
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Jupitarian-Felenoid Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! Instant fav!
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much man! Glad that you like it! :aww:
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ZephyrTsubasa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
This is just superb!!
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much! Appreciate the compliment :aww:
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ZephyrTsubasa Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
You're very welcome!!
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SleepyOctopus Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Student General Artist
i like how it turned out :D
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Me too mang. Me too.....
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Shikuroshi Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Deliciously sinister! ♥
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Mmmm, yess, quite delicious indeed. Thank you for the comment! :heart:
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0parkp Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
This is incredible - those claws look deadly!
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:iconmoozika:
Moozika Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :aww: They make greater nut crackers and can openers I heard :)
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BanditCloud Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Student General Artist
too soft make a sharp focal point and add some shine to his exterior here and there.
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